Loved it...
One edit though...
"He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying."
Instead of "had", I'd use "possessed"
Enable DirectPlayI effin hate Windows 10 bought a new Dell gaming laptop 2 months ago and have been trying ever since to get some of my older favorite programs to work. Sick to death of Microsoft and Apple thinking they have to micro manage every teeny tiny thing you do anymore.